It’s Droubble Drabble Time

•November 14, 2008 • 1 Comment

Just giving a head’s up to any writers itching to try their pens at a restricted short. Here’s the next contest running at The Next Big Writer. Droubbles are 200 words exactly and drabbles are 100 words exactly. Good luck to anyone who wants to enter.

Deadline: January 15, 2009:

Times Are Tough Droubble/Drabble Writing Competition

Take a look at the picture below:

It is of a homeless man leaning against a storefront during the Great Depression. Write about this man and the picture. What is he doing there? Where is he? Who is he? Why is he there? Why is he homeless? These are some of the questions open to exploration.

We’ll be awarding two $100 prizes. One for the best Droubble and the other for the best Drabble.

Per Wikipedia: “A drabble is an extremely short work of fiction exactly one hundred words in length, although the term is often misused to indicate a short story of less than 1000 words. The purpose of the drabble is brevity and to test the author’s ability to express interesting and meaningful ideas in an extremely confined space. Richard N. Hill recently coined the phrase “dribble” to describe a story that is only 50 words. Michael Kent of The Next Big Writer added “droubble” for a double drabble, a story in exactly 200 words.”

To enter: Posting your writing story anytime during the Contest period. The Drabble submission must include the tags Tough Drabble (entered as tough_drabble) while the Droubble must include the tags Tough Droubble (entered as tough_droubble)..

Deadline: 11:59 PM ET on January 15, 2009

Awards:

  • $100 to the best Droubble.
  • $100 to the best Drabble.

Submit Your Story


~ Signing off and sending out cyber hugs.

Little Bitty Time Gobblers

•November 8, 2008 • 9 Comments

450009922_96f54abd73_mIt seems it’s harder and harder to find time these days to write, of course it happens to be right when I’m trying to cram a 50,000-word stint into a month. When my daughter took a nap today, I excitedly sat down at my keyboard, knowing I’d have a good two hours, quiet hours while my sons were in school, to work on my story.

But, nope, my parents stopped by for a surprise visit because it was my mom’s day off and they stayed for hours. I’d only penned about 400 words and neglected to save the upgrade so I could let them in and when my son came home, he added drawings to my story and I didn’t realize it was my story and closed it. So my little bit of work for the day was gone and I’m back to yesterday’s word count.

Then I cleaned some, made dinner, fed the family, gave my husband a little loving when he came home and now I’m neglecting the whole lot somewhat, not totally since they’re in the room, but I’m hoping for a little bit of alone time soon so I can actually write.

Sometimes I can write with distractions all around, the TV on, the radio, kids yelling, but this Nano project is such a bizarre storyline that I’d like some peace and quiet to think through the plot I neglected to outline beforehand. I’m not really firm with my characters either, I’m just winging it all and running with sticks and nailing and gluing them together, wherever they seem to fit. I have faeries and another group of otherworldly creatures called the wanderlings in this odd romance and I’ve done absolutely no world building for them yet since that idea was a late addition to what was supposed to be a simple, linear plot. Yeah right. I can never do simple. I’ll plug the details and meat into my story later. I’m just trying to get the stick-built house up before the deadline. The decorating and furnishings can come later.

Whoo. Now I’m off to work, hopefully. Crossing fingers. Well, just for a moment. Now I’m gettin’ busy. Not that kind of busy. Get your head outta the gutter. Working. I meant working, trying to make good use of quickly dissolving time.

~ Signing off and sending out cyber hugs.

November FIRST Featured Novel ~ Forsaken

•November 3, 2008 • No Comments

About the Author:

James David Jordan is a business litigation attorney with the prominent Texas law firm of Munsch Hardt Kopf & Harr, P.C. From 1998 through 2005, he served as the firm’s Chairman and CEO. The Dallas Business Journal has named him one of the most influential leaders in the Dallas/Fort Worth legal community and one of the top fifteen business defense attorneys in Dallas/Fort Worth. His peers have voted him one of the Best Lawyers in America in commercial litigation.

A minister’s son who grew up in the Mississippi River town of Alton, Illinois, Jim has a law degree and MBA from the University of Illinois, and a journalism degree from the University of Missouri. He lives with his wife and two teenage children in the Dallas suburbs.

Jim grew up playing sports and loves athletics of all kinds. But he especially loves baseball, the sport that is a little bit closer to God than all the others.

His first novel was Something that Lasts . Forsaken is his second novel.

Product Details:

List Price: $14.99
Paperback: 400 pages
Publisher: B&H Fiction (October 1, 2008)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 0805447490
ISBN-13: 978-0805447491

Forsaken ~ A Novel by James David Jordan

~ Chapter 1 ~

Even in high school I didn’t mind sleeping on the ground. When your father is a retired Special Forces officer, you pick up things that most girls don’t learn. As the years passed I slept in lots of places a good girl shouldn’t sleep. It’s a part of my past I don’t brag about, like ugly wallpaper that won’t come unstuck. No matter how hard I scrape, it just hangs on in big, obscene blotches. I’m twenty-nine years old now, and I’ve done my best to paint over it. But it’s still there under the surface, making everything rougher, less presentable than it should be. Though I want more than anything to be smooth and fresh and clean.

Sometimes I wonder what will happen if the paint begins to fade. Will the wallpaper show? I thought so for a long time. But I have hope now that it won’t. Simon Mason helped me find that hope. That’s why it’s important for me to tell our story. There must be others who need hope, too. There must be others who are afraid that their ugly wallpaper might bleed through.

What does sleeping on the ground have to do with a world-famous preacher like Simon Mason? The story begins twelve years ago—eleven years before I met Simon. My dad and I packed our camping gear and went fishing. It was mid-May, and the trip was a present for my seventeenth birthday. Not exactly every high school girl’s dream, but my dad wasn’t like most dads. He taught me to camp and fish and, particularly, to shoot. He had trained me in self-defense since I was nine, the year Mom fell apart and left for good. With my long legs, long arms, and Dad’s athletic genes, I could handle myself even back then. I suppose I wasn’t like most other girls.

After what happened on that fishing trip, I know I wasn’t.

Fishing with my dad didn’t mean renting a cane pole and buying bait pellets out of a dispenser at some catfish tank near an RV park. It generally meant tramping miles across a field to a glassy pond on some war buddy’s ranch, or winding through dense woods, pitching a tent, and fly fishing an icy stream far from the nearest telephone. The trips were rough, but they were the bright times of my life—and his, too. They let him forget the things that haunted him and remember how to be happy.

This particular outing was to a ranch in the Texas Panhandle, owned by a former Defense Department bigwig. The ranch bordered one of the few sizeable lakes in a corner of Texas that is brown and rocky and dry. We loaded Dad’s new Chevy pickup with cheese puffs and soft drinks—healthy eat­ing wouldn’t begin until the first fish hit the skillet—and left Dallas just before noon with the bass boat in tow. The drive was long, but we had leather interior, plenty of tunes, and time to talk. Dad and I could always talk.

The heat rose early that year, and the temperature hung in the nineties. Two hours after we left Dallas, the brand-new air conditioner in the brand-new truck rattled and clicked and dropped dead. We drove the rest of the way with the windows down while the high Texas sun tried to burn a hole through the roof.

Around five-thirty we stopped to use the bathroom at a rundown gas station somewhere southeast of Amarillo. The station was nothing but a twisted gray shack dropped in the middle of a hundred square miles of blistering hard pan. It hadn’t rained for a month in that part of Texas, and the place was so baked that even the brittle weeds rolled over on their bellies, as if preparing a last-ditch effort to drag themselves to shade.

The restroom door was on the outside of the station, iso­lated from the rest of the building. There was no hope of cool­ing off until I finished my business and got around to the little store in the front, where a rusty air conditioner chugged in the window. When I walked into the bathroom, I had to cover my nose and mouth with my hand. A mound of rotting trash leaned like a grimy snow drift against a metal garbage can in the corner. Thick, black flies zipped and bounced from floor to wall and ceiling to floor, occasionally smacking my arms and legs as if I were a bumper in a buzzing pinball machine. It was the filthiest place I’d ever been.

Looking back, it was an apt spot to begin the filthiest night of my life.

I had just leaned over the rust-ringed sink to inspect my teeth in the sole remaining corner of a shattered mirror when someone pounded on the door.

“Just a minute!” I turned on the faucet. A soupy liquid dribbled out, followed by the steamy smell of rotten eggs. I turned off the faucet, pulled my sport bottle from the holster on my hip, and squirted water on my face and in my mouth. I wiped my face on the sleeve of my T-shirt.

My blue-jean cutoffs were short and tight, and I pried free a tube of lotion that was wedged into my front pocket. I raised one foot at a time to the edge of the toilet seat and did my best to brush the dust from my legs. Then I spread the lotion over them. The ride may have turned me into a dust ball, but I was determined at least to be a soft dust ball with a coconut scent. Before leaving I took one last look in my little corner of mir­ror. The hair was auburn, the dust was beige. I gave the hair a shake, sending tiny flecks floating through a slash of light that cut the room diagonally from a hole in the roof. Someone pounded on the door again. I turned away from the mirror.

“Okay, okay, I’m coming!”

When I pulled open the door and stepped into the light, I shaded my eyes and blinked to clear away the spots. All that I could think about was the little air conditioner in the front window and how great it would feel when I got inside. That’s probably why I was completely unprepared when a man’s hand reached from beside the door and clamped hard onto my wrist.

The Trumpet Has Sounded

•November 1, 2008 • 3 Comments

It’s November 1st, the trumpet has sounded to kickoff Nano mania. I made some character sketches and have ideas about plot, but I did not outline. I usually just wing it, so we’ll see how this goes, especially with my complicated plot idea. I found a couple books on authonomy with a similar thread as mine, but hopefully I can bring more freshness to the concept with my flow and characterization. I’ve already started to write and the first chapter came out pretty good. The hardest part for me will be to just write and not nitpick my stuff to death. I’m the kind of writer who likes to edit somewhat as I go. But now is the time for just getting it down. I’m off!

Have fun if you’re nanoing and also if you’re not.

~Signing off and sending out cyber hugs.

The Web You Weave

•October 30, 2008 • 10 Comments

I’ve been talking a bit about creating a web presence if you’re a writer. Whether you’re just starting off, seeking representation, published through a big house or self-published, having a Googleable name is a vital key to success that shouldn’t be overlooked. And it’s never too early or late to start, unless your book is out of print.

You can go on Myspace and befriend readers who read the kind of books you write. Everyone’s already organized by age, location, interests. How perfect is that? If you’re book can tap niche markets of tennis players or gourmet cooks, you can find those potential readers with a few clicks. You could try Facebook too, but I tend to find that people are WAY more exclusive and snobby. I haven’t been able to make new friends whom I didn’t meet in another venue first, especially with Christians. If you’re a Christian, try ShoutLife. People are super friendly there. You’ll get fifty friend requests or more within the first two days.

You can also set up profiles at sites like AuthorsDen and Booksie to showcase sample chapters or stories and poems you don’t intend on shopping. You can join online communities, forums and critique workshops. Are you thinking about blogging, but wondering what’s the point. If you write anything from songs to poetry to novels to nonfiction books, blogging is a good outlet and it’s free. Here’s more on the benefits of blogging:

It’s fun.
It’s good practice.
You can make friends.
You can earn money through click advertising and merchandising.
You can meet and support other writers.
You can convert your posts into articles and submit them elsewhere.
You can combine your love of writing with other interests to create niche blogs these these I read: The Writing Runner [writing and running], Write Meg [writing and yummy treats], Live Out of the Box [writing and travel].
You can add advice into the spectrum using your own expertise, experience, spin and voice.
It’s a form of publishing.
A blog can be bigger than journaling to become an online workshop, an e-zine, a book tour, a co-mingling of several writers.
A blog builds a writing portfolio.
It gives you a web presence, makes you Googleable.
It gives you a place to let off some steam and share good news.
It gives agents more information about you and your writing ability.
It helps you appear professional and serious about having a writing career.
It keeps your brain active and gets your juices flowing.
It keeps you accountable in your writing goals and encourages you to practice what you preach.
It works well in tandem with a webpage, which tends to remain more static, especially if you’re unpublished.
If you write good content, people will keep coming back and you can build up a readership.
If you write nonfiction, it can be a great marketing tool, to show your expertise.

Will you get millions of buyers rushing out in droves to purchase your debut novel? Probably not. But you definitely get some, and some readers is better than none.
So keep on getting those words out. Someone in the world wants to hear what you have to say. Get your name out there. Make contacts. Have fun. Weave a web using the Web that collects readers from all angles.

~ Signing off and sending out cyber hugs.

The Exasperating Drive of Censorship

•October 29, 2008 • 3 Comments

Censorship is so exasperating, especially when it worms its way down into every nook and cranny in word world. No. I don’t mean allowing for hate speech. I’m not talking about inconsistency, like x-ing out a word like pissed but oddly not ones far worse. Can’t stand that. Nor do I mean book burning, being obsessively politically correct or affixing rating stickers to books like other forms of entertainment. I’m referring to the intentional blocking of words and meanings in the most important tools a writer needs: the dictionary and thesaurus. Can’t they bump up to PG-13 at least?

MSWorks makes you want to yank your hair out, Open Office even more so, but online databases are not much better. If you’re trying to keep profanity out of your work and look up a word like jerk or even the a-word, you get synonyms for fool, idiot and the like. No. No. Jerk can only be used so often and that’s what you call someone who plays a joke on you not a guy who’s taunting you day after day, not a guy who burns your best friend’s skin just because she’s black. Rape, in a nonsexual sense, is nowhere to be found. You have to start with a word like steal or destroy.

Are there “street” versions of these tools? That’s what I need. I looked up the word jumped, as in to ambush and pummel someone to near death, a common usage, to get jumped, but no, I get a slew of words meaning to hop, leap, and surprise. Surprise is closer but associated with party hats and streamers. Not quite right. I need to know if I’m spelling hocked right. Or is it hawked? What’s to steal and redistribute goods? Hawking means peddling? But is this how it’s spelled in contemporary application? Not sure. Censors go way too far when they stifle and smother language in the sources we writers need. So annoying!!! I get totally aggravated when stupid little things like this slow me down. I can’t economize my time well when I have to hunt for alternatives for one stinkin’ word. Shizzlefitz!!

~ Signing off and sending out cyber hugs.

Wondering Who is Where???

•October 26, 2008 • 3 Comments


I was curious to know if any of my readers and friends are on Absolute Write. If you’re not, check it out. It’s a great place to get feedback and pick up information. There are tons of articles for both fiction writers and nonfic. I just joined today. I haven’t had time to really graze yet; I’ve only dipped my toes in, but it looks spectacular. I also relish good forums for writing and sports like Sons of Sam Horn to feed my RedSox addiction, especially during the off-season, which unfortunately is now. Yahoo forums are a mess. I am also at WritingForums.com and am courtneyv at both AW and FW.

A full spectrum of writers are on those two forums: some accomplished and some, well…in need of much polish and butt kicking. I’m in the middle. Hopefully closer to the top, closer to publication. I do believe in my ability to write mostly because I’ve gotten much insightful critique that has helped me improve, I religiously read reviews on Amazon to know what readers are craving then cater my work to meet such demands, I learn from other writers and I read books on technique and apply the new tools I’ve discovered. If you’re a writer and you never learn from anyone else and never try to grow, so convinced your way is right, you may be dooming yourself. If many people are telling you the same things, then listen and make adjustments. Yes, your work needs to be a reflection of you and your voice and style, but it also needs to be marketable…if publication through an actual house and not a POD pub is your goal.

I realized my first novel was weak and unpublishable as-is on my own because I learned about story questions and mine became resolved not near enough to the end. It needs a major rewrite. So when I wrote my second novel, I was more aware of structure and made sure the main conflict and that vital question wasn’t fully resolved until the end. I hope to glean even more info from writers willing to dish on these forums. You can also get feedback on your queries and submission pieces.

On AW I learned of the Bantam Spectra Fiction Contest through Random House. It’s a new short fiction contest for unpublished writers of science fiction, fantasy, and horror. If you write in those genres, check it out. It only takes one entry per person. I trimmed and lowered the word count in my Celebrity Vampire piece and will submit it. I know I’m way out of my league, but there’s nothing to lose, so I may as well try.

~ Signing off and sending out cyber hugs.

My Junk Drawer

•October 25, 2008 • No Comments

Well, my entry into the Celebrity Vampire Contest at The Next Big Writer did not win. I figured. We had to write a story about a celebrity being or becoming a vampire or a zombie. My stories are just never what’s being sought. My effort has all the things that make a good vampire story, seductiveness, horror, immortality, blood, erotic undertones. I thought I did well and was so glad I created something deeper than dialogue fluff complete with ironic twinges, mostly in tying back to the title, but my fab story is basically junk now. It’s not really the kind of thing that can be shopped elsewhere with it being so specific. So, I’ll post it here, in a quiet, little display case in cyberspace.

~ Life in Paris ~

Streams of purple, green and turquoise light replaced red and yellow as the DJ’s next selection pulsed from the speakers. Even across the noisy, low-lit club and through the crowd of gyrating fools, Stefan drew her attention by simply mouthing her name. His power was stronger than ever because of his need to feed.

Beyond hypnotist, beyond car salesman, beyond Siren, Stefan could seduce with mere thought, when his thirst was like this. In his 500-and-some-odd-year existence, he’d never spotted anyone, be it royal or vagrant, with more vivacity. He licked his lip, anticipating her flavor.

In his white, button-down with a black flower scrolling up the left, he knew he looked sharp. He straightened his collar. She never broke eye contact. He had her. With their eyes locked, Stefan timed his steps with the bass, stalking toward the laughing goddess. Her golden hair changed like a kaleidoscope under the spinning globes, reflecting countless colors.

She wiggled like a snake, charmed to follow his mental choreography. He smirked. By the time she knew what was happening to her, it’d be too late. He imagined her gasp, but he would muzzle her scream with the scarf in his pocket, the silk one he’d bought at Versace just for her.

“Hi, Gorgeous,” she shouted, pulling him around two lesbians. A fuchsia mini-dress hugged her body in much the way he hoped to. As she flipped her hair, jasmine, lavender and spice swirled into his nose.

“Hi. I’m Stefan. You’re Paris Hilton, right?”

“Of course. Gonna ask me to dance or what? I’m used to the gawking, but I can’t stand shyness. It’s so not hot.”

He laughed, clamping her against himself with his arm. “Better?”

Her lip corners turned up. “Definitely.”

All the closer, he moaned, drinking in her hair’s scent, now ringing of honeysuckle in its bouquet. He cleared his throat to cover his involuntary response.

In pictures, he spotted a rare essence in her, one that spurred unquenchable lust. He stole his way on a private jet and followed her around for days, shielded by paparazzi. Then he muscled in here with his aqua eyes, piercing a gorilla into compliance. In person, her eyes, combined with her aroma and body, had him nearly bursting through his jeans and aching to suck her dry.

“Man. You’re luscious,” he said.

She nodded, batting her lashes, long and faux. “Yeah, I know. Do ya live around here?”

“No. Just visiting, sightseeing, business.”

“Oh. That’s cool, Stef. I’m in a new movie so I’m too busy to show you around, but if you need help, I have people who do that…for my friends.”

“Yeah. Doesn’t surprise me. What’s your movie?”

Dead of Night. I’m playing the head vamp in an urban fantasy or something like that. I get to kick ass. Is that cool or what?”

Ha! The irony! Stefan burst out laughing.

“What’s so funny?” she said, squinting. “Don’t you think I’d make a good, ass-kicking vampire?”

“No. I’m sure you will. It’s just, uh, Hollywood never gets it right. Perception’s so narrow and wrong.”

She shrugged and circled her hand in the air as though casting off a gnat. “Whatever. I guess. I get to fly around on one of those zipping harness thingies. I like the way you dance. It’s hot.”

“Years of practice.”

She tilted her head and smiled. “I’ll bet. Ya wanna go somewhere to play around some? A place that’s more…private, not so noisy?”

Stefan couldn’t believe his luck. He didn’t have to coerce her, stare her down or anything. Maybe he’d turn her instead. They could be eternal companions. Two beautiful people…immortal…absolute perfection. “Love to, baby. This is crazy. I never expected to be talking to Paris Hilton, let alone taking off with her. Have a place in mind?”

“We can use a room upstairs? They totally love me here.”

“Really? You actually stay somewhere that’s not a Hilton?”

“Ha ha. Ye-es. Very funny.” She pointed to the back of the lounge. “We can leave out the VIP exit. Come on.” She collected her hair in her fist, stripping out static. He longed to lick her palm. It pained him to lose out on any of her. She laced her fingers around. “Your hands are so cold.”

“I know. They won’t be for long.”

“Yeah. I’ll warm you up. It’s one of my many talents.”

Stefan’s pulse quickened and dizziness filled his head. He couldn’t wait to set her aflame on a bed on ivory satin or something, then jam that scarf in her mouth, see those eyes beseeching for mercy. Too bad she’d donned blue lenses; the terror in her natural brown would be spectacular.

Paris ushered him to a wall and did something he couldn’t see. Soon it sprung open, revealing a hallway. She closed the door and lead him through a labyrinth of flickering, zapping florescence. The music and noise dulled behind him and faded to pulsating thumps. Reaching the end, they climbed one of several iron staircases. Atop the landing, she opened another door, opening to a suite through a bookcase.

“Ta da. Welcome to my princess suite.”

“Wow. It’s so…perfect.”

“I know, right.” She closed the door.

Stefan had seen his share of palaces and ritzy resorts, and this stood toe-to-toe in elegance. He was right! He nearly cheered. A bed of ivory satin. So perfect for love, birth and death. Against golden walls, linens and furniture gleamed in cream tones. Paintings, vases, flowers and fruit added color as did an oriental chandelier over the bed.

A fruit bowl and chilled wine sat on the coffee table near the couch, which would come in handy if loosening up was needed. The more surrender in the prey, the better the essence. He shook his head as she walked him to the bed, shining like an alter for sacrifice.

Paris turned to him, her face so angelic and kind. It held self-assuredness but not a hint of the cockiness jealous girls try to affix to her. “I’m not normally loose or anything, but you’re sexy and caught me on a horny night. My boyfriend’s out of town. Hope you don’t mind.”

“No. We can do whatever. Kiss even. I don’t care. Doesn’t he mind?”

“Nope. He loves my impulsiveness, is completely understanding. He knows how I get.”

Stefan kissed her, caressing her tongue with his. She sucked on his offering, inciting arousal, distracting him from his primary need. Stefan decided to quicken things. He picked her up, half-dropping her on the bed, clumsier than he’d intended. Laughing, she yanked his head down, reconnecting their mouths. He joined her in the ivory heaven. After they kissed in a frenzy of grabbing and groping, she unbuttoned his shirt and ran greedy hands along his chest and back.

After complimenting his physique, she flipped them over and straddled him. She kissed exposed spots while unfastening his denim fly. When her hands wandered in, he gritted his teeth and focused on the funky chandelier, trying to ignore the sensations firing off below his stomach. He had to move now.

Stefan slid his hand into his pocket, and wave after wave of his fingertips, wadded the scarf. He’d switch positions, pin her down, get the job done. He’d gaze into her fake-blue eyes then drink her in until she was clinging to life by a thin thread. Maybe he’d show mercy, give her the choice. He wanted to give her the choice. To be or not to be? The question of life.

She ripped away his shirt, popping the last two buttons she never bothered to undo. She devoured his chest and neck in wet kisses and bites, some sharper than others. What the hell. No harm in playing first. He grimaced whenever she seemed to be going for a kill.

Following figure-eights around his pecks with her tongue, she returned to his neck. He could have sworn sharp teeth punctured his flesh. The anguish! He gasped and tried to scream, but his mouth was jammed with some filthy rag. A rag! Not a $3,000 scarf carefully selected to match a handbag. A rag. A stinky, used rag, drenched in Lemon Pledge.

His mortal cry emitted as a sour note from the distant depths of hell. Pain seared his heart. Breath evaded him. She was so strong and draining him faster than he could regenerate. He struggled to push her off, but his arms felt glued to the bedspread. He clammed his eyes shut as blood burned like fire, leaving his veins, replaced with an icy chill. She drank his life-force, essence and supposed immortality.

A jostle at the door and a bang made him jolt and peek through heavy lids. Paris pulled away to look, her mouth framed with glorious red. No spectacle on earth, and he’d seen countless, had ever awed him more. He longed to kiss her again and taste their mixed essences. Must be like honey straight from the hive.

“Huuuukkk!” rattled the blond, who’d entered. “Finally! I’ve been looking everywhere for you…Fabulous! Another one? Thought you said you were good to go for a week or so.”

“Yeah. But he’s a psychic vampire. Unbelievable! Gotta be at least 500, Nic.”

Nic? Right. Lionel’s anorexic brat.

“Do you know how rare one like this is? He’s absorbed so much energy and beauty in his lifetime…only to be a gift for me. Delicious. I’m feeling kind of generous. Want some?”

“Hell no! I’d never take your crappy scraps. I snagged a sitter. Hurry up, bitch. A bunch of us are going to The Green Door.”

“Kay. Gimme a sec.”

Nicole left as noisily as she’d entered.

“Sorry about the interruption, Gorgeous. She needs to get her own lair. I always tell her to knock, but she freakin’ never does! Hate her sometimes.”

He tried to speak but lemony dirt swallowed his word.

She ungagged his mouth. “What, hun?”

He gasped for hair and muttered, “Question.”

“What? I can’t hear,” she said, putting her ear close to his mouth. He stretched his tongue and licked his blood off her lips.

She jerked away, slapping his chest. “Uh-uhn, bad boy.”

“Do I get….mercy?”

“Sure, baby. I’m totally sweet like that.” She returned to his neck, taking a fresh bite. He screamed but it exited as a hoarse shrill. His mind zipped back to age twelve, to the day his uncle showed him the secret of energy absorption, which would allow him to never get sick, heal rapidly and live forever. Forever? What a joke! His youth spent gathering energy from any passerby had been child’s play. He’d waited until the perfect age in adulthood to partake in a total feed. He froze. He’d forgotten age. He’d forgotten love. He’d forgotten time, pain and mortality. And he felt them all in this moment.

Paris slid off him, wiped her mouth with the back of her hand and licked off the blood.

To be or not to be? “Thank…you,” he whispered as she straightened her dress with a shimmy.

“I know, right?” She blew him a kiss. “Bye, Gorgeous. That was hot.” She flipped her phone and said, “Jimmy! Need another clean up, but give him ten…Yes, a wonderful feast. No, not that messy. Thank you. Mwah. You’re the best.” She sashayed to the door, hips and arms swaying, looking energized and refreshed, more beautiful than before.

The taste of their mixed essence clung to his tongue like nectar of the gods. The lights went off, door closed. Darkness engulfed him, signaling his earthly exeunt. His body felt as old as it was. The minimal blood in his decaying shell pooled in his throat and lungs. He was drowning. His skin wrinkled, pulled taught. His bones splintered and snapped, tearing through muscle. He fell and kept falling into some abyss. He couldn’t scream. He wanted to sing and rejoice. On a bed of ivory satin he lay dying in agony, and he never felt more alive. To be.

~ Signing off and sending out cyber hugs.

Putting Yourself Out There

•October 22, 2008 • 4 Comments

I’ve heard that blogging is a waste of time for aspiring fiction writers, but I don’t find that to be true. If you’re expecting loads of sales based on your blog, you’ll probably be disappointed. But I love getting to know and hear from other writers, sharing ideas I have about writing and encouraging others in the process. It’s always good to put your name out there. Any exposure, well, not any, but most avenues of exposure are beneficial to you. Writers need publicity. If you’re blogging, it’s a free way to find potential readers.

So, to me, blogging isn’t a waste of time. Writing what’s on your heart and mind is never a waste of time. Author Eric Wilson got the attention of an editor with his excellent book reviews on Amazon. Who would have thought writing book reviews would lead to publication?

You just have to change up your view at what a successful blog is. Having a blog is a way readers and writers, and agents too, can see what you’re all about. Plus, some agent or editor could be surfing for info about Irish Setters and your blog about Irish Setters could get you an in. Never stop writing in whatever direction you’re inspired.

I do recommend that you don’t trash other writers, agents, editors or publishing houses on your blog. If you need to vent, leave names out of it. And also, it’s okay to have bad days and talk about it, but if you’re blog is overall angst-ridden, criticizing or droopy, that doesn’t give a good impression. It’s unprofessional and could have an on-the-fence agent, with your query in hand, passing you over. Use your blog to carve a positive niche in cyberspace, make friends, have fun and get your name out there. Keep at it.

~ Signing off and sending out cyber hugs.

Nutty for NaNo

•October 17, 2008 • 9 Comments

Okay. I caved to peer pressure. Everyone in my writing circle at The Next Big Writer has decided to jump into the perilous Nano waters. So who am I to not follow other crazy lemmings. We’re all super busy working on various projects already, but we’re going to put them aside for the mad rush to pen 50,000 words in thirty days.

If you’re doing NaNo too, drop me a note on NaNoWriMo at majesticmadness so I can add you as a friend.

So what am I working on in November? Good question. A romantic core engulfed in speculative fiction/urban fantasy would be my guess, but that could change into something even more complex. What else pits a famous starlet against a gypsy…with fairies and other otherworldly creatures in the mix. I’m crazy, but I’ll give it a whirl. November is the time for experimentation and going nutty. I’m so ready to jump. Join the madness.

~ Signing off and sending out cyber hugs.